The Power of a Writing Group for Publishing Success

By Sharon Bially  |  December 11, 2017  | 

If you’ve been in a writing group, you know how valuable it is to have a community of writerly peers to debate craft with, to vent with about rejection and rejoice with over triumphs, large and small.

But what if, beyond feeling like family and supporting you through your next round of revisions, your writing group was powerful? So powerful, in fact, that the manuscripts emerging from it regularly went on to land major publishing deals and launch the type of literary careers most of us only dream of?

It may sound too good to be true. But in the Boston area, a cluster of modest, hard-working novelists formed a writing group back in 2012 that has played a key role in catapulting authors including Celeste Ng, Alexandria Marzano-Lesnevich and Grace Talusan into the literary limelight. And under the deceptively unassuming name  “the Chunky Monkeys,” this writing group on steroids has just recently seen 3 of its members simultaneously achieve stunning  — almost unheard of — success:

  • Sonya Larson’s story “Gabe Dove” was published in Houghton Mifflin’s The Best American Short Stories 2017 .
  • The debut novel The Age of Light by Whitney Scharer sold to Little, Brown in late September, in a highly buzzed-about, 7-figure deal that followed an intense bidding war and was covered by Entertainment Weekly and the Boston Globe.
  • Chip Cheek‘s debut novel, Cape May, sold in another major deal – pre-emptive – to Celadon Books in the new Macmillan imprint’s first acquisition.

Not to mention the ongoing accomplishments of other “Chunks:”

  • Celeste Ng’s second novel, Little Fires Everywhere, came out this past September and debuted at #7 on the NY Times bestseller list. Celeste’s debut novel, Everything I Never Told You, topped Amazon’s Best Books of the Year list for 2014.
  • Grace Talusan’s debut essay collection, The Body Papers, won the 2017 Resless Books competition and will be published in the fall of 2018.
  • Alexandria Marzano-Lesnevich’s memoir, The Fact of a Body, came out in May 2017 to much acclaim, including by the New York Times.

Let’s take a moment just to say: Wow.

While such a feat may seem completely unfathomable, the secret behind this concentration of rare literary accomplishments is something that should be pretty intuitive to WU-ers:

Community.

Departing from the pervasive image of the irascible, shut-in author type, these authors all attribute their accomplishments to involvement with…each other.

I had a chance to talk about this with a few of the Chunks last month. It turns out that the group started off much like any other writing group. The members had hardly any accolades back then. The thought of starting– much less finishing or selling — a book seemed like a far-off dream to most of the group’s members. Over bags of off-brand Cheetos from CVS, they toiled together with no sense of competition or navel-gazing; just a desire to bring one’s “A-game” as an artist. They respected one another’s artistic talent, rigor, and commitment to hard work.

As Sonya Larson told me:

The great power of the Chunks is members’ genuine desire to help one another throughout their projects and careers — through the highest high’s of snagging a book deal or winning some cool award, but also through the lowest lows of struggling to sell a book, or nail a point of view, or resurrect a lifeless essay.  

A writer’s life has so few wins, and it’s been essential to have the Chunks buoy one another in those winless spans. They’ve helped me “get real” with myself, game-plan a project, and discuss craft in a very exquisite and soulful way.  We hold each other to very high standards, and that seems to be paying off. We started keeping a spreadsheet of “Yayable Things” that were happening for us a couple years ago, and then we just stopped because there were too damn many. They include huge book deals, NEA awards, major fellowships, appearances on Seth Myers, cold-calls from The New Yorker. The list also includes important news of our personal lives– the Chunks having babies, changing jobs, moving, undergoing surgery and illness and loss. We babysit one another’s kids and do each other’s laundry when we’re sick. We are writers, yes, but always friends first. And that, to me, is the special sauce.

Of course, there is a little more to the Chunks’ superpowers than meets the eye: most of the members hold MFAs, and all are actively involved with GrubStreet, the largest independent creative writing center in the U.S., based in Boston — as instructors, staff members, even students in the occasional workshop or class.

Although all of this may seem a bit inaccessible to to the masses, there’s a lot we can all learn from the Chunks’ model, and many ways to put some of those lessons to use powering up our own writing groups. Here’s my take:

Seek a broader writing community and get involved
Some of the best writing groups emerge from relationships forged in classes, workshops and seminars. You don’t have to live in Boston; there are writers organizations across the country, and many, like GrubStreet and Sackett Street Writers in New York, offer classes online.

Hold each other to high standards
It might be tempting to dish out praise and compliments while keeping your honest critiques to yourself, but doing so will not help your peers — just as hearing only positive feedback won’t help you. Balance comments about what you liked in a writing sample with constructive criticism. If this exercise is new to you, taking classes or workshops will help you learn how to communicate effectively about the craft of writing.

Try to include a few agented or published authors
Published or agented writers bring a valuable publishing industry perspective to the table, along with experience giving and receiving feedback to share. Writing classes and workshops are a great place to meet them.

Invite published authors to give guest talks and critique sessions
Can’t seem to get a published or agented writer to join your group? Invite an author to join you as a guest instead every now and then. A local author with a new book out would surely be thrilled to stop by your group, talk about his or her latest title and offer comments on some pages sent over in advance by one or more members of your group. Repeat a couple of times a year. The same thing can also be done remotely with authors anywhere, by google hangouts or Skype.

Share feedback from professional manuscript consultations
Plenty of organizations, including GrubStreet, offer manuscript consultations with published authors for a reasonable fee. Encourage the members of your group to get manuscript consultations from time to time then to share the feedback with all.

Commit
Approach your writer’s group with the same level of commitment you’d give to any other serious, long-term endeavor such as grad school, or a job. It may be fun and entertaining to go, but that doesn’t mean you should see it as something you can turn on and off like the TV. Create and stick to a regular schedule. Show up for every session. Go home and work those pages. Give it your all. Lather, rinse, repeat.

Are you in a writing group? What’s its special sauce? 

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13 Comments

  1. Bryan Fagan on December 11, 2017 at 10:46 am

    Being involved in a couple of writers groups I have learned that it is a relationship. Like a relationship, sometimes they break up but every now and than a successful one emerges.

    My first group broke apart. Personalities/egos got in the way but my second one is a happy marriage. The key is to respect, to listen and to learn. In the group you wrote about, success has become another addition.

    Groups are vital and every writer needs one. But the key is finding the right one. Good stuff. Thanks!!!!



  2. Deb Boone on December 11, 2017 at 12:20 pm

    This is so inspiring, Sharon. All of the points above are so valid. I’m adding one more: Patience. It takes time to find your tribe. Like all relationships, it takes time and curiosity and care to learn who these people are, what they really want and need, and how to effectively communicate that to them. Trust is built over time. So is real friendship. The bond that occurs is like chain links fitting together and becoming stronger, while at the same time appreciating and celebrating each link is uniquely different, maybe one is round, another oval, silver or brass.

    I’m happy to say I’m in a developing tribe. We write in different styles and genres, which underlines the power of story and hope. We’re learning each other, learning each other’s voice, learning the stories we are destined to tell.

    Excellent points, Sharon. Thank you.



    • Anne O'Brien Carelli on December 11, 2017 at 2:37 pm

      Totally agree. It takes time to make sure you are comfortable sharing and respect the feedback. But it’s definitely worth the time to get it right.



  3. CG Blake on December 11, 2017 at 12:46 pm

    Thanks for this great post, Sharon. I’m a member of two writer’s groups, in addition to my active participation in WU. One is a large group that meets monthly at our local library. It is a high level group with many wise critics. I don’t dare bring in any work that is not polished and ready for prime time. Then there is my safe harbor group, where we read our work aloud. We often bring in first drafts. It is a small group with three to five members per meeting. This group meets needs that the larger one doesn’t for me. Having a group of honest critics is essential to a writer’s growth.



  4. Laura Droege on December 11, 2017 at 4:39 pm

    Do you have any tips on how to find an in-person group? I live in an area that is very focused on technology/science, and the writers I know write fantasy/SF. There’s nothing wrong with that, though I dislike those genres and don’t think I could help them much as I don’t read what they do. (If I’m going to be in a group, I want to be helping others, too!) They’re also generally new writers. Some haven’t finished a first draft of a full length work. I’m working on my 4th novel. The local university doesn’t offer creative writing classes often, if at all. I’m not trying to whine, but Alabama feels like a literary dead zone.

    Any suggestions? I can get feedback from a writing review site, but that’s not the same as having a writer’s group.



    • Kathy Holzapfel on December 12, 2017 at 9:46 am

      Laura, I have a similar problem in the Florida Panhandle. My current choices are drive four-hours, round trip, to Pensacola or Tallahassee, which isn’t always feasible, especially for evening meetings. For now, I’m settling with being more active in a few online writers groups, but it’s not as satisfying as a live group.



      • Laura Droege on December 12, 2017 at 3:19 pm

        Thank God, someone else understands!



  5. Laura Droege on December 11, 2017 at 4:52 pm

    I’d already left a comment, but I think it got eaten by the web!

    Any tips on how to find a writer’s group? I’ve struggled. My area is heavily focused on science and technology and the majority of writers I’ve met are writing SF/fantasy. There’s nothing wrong with those. But I don’t read much in those genres and don’t see how I could help them. The writers also tend to be dabblers. Some haven’t finished a first draft of a full-length work. I’ve written four novels. I want to be held to high standards by a group, and for the other group members to want the same thing.

    The local university doesn’t offer creative writing classes often, if at all. I can go online to get feedback, but that’s not the same as having a group in real life.



    • Sharon Bially on December 12, 2017 at 11:43 am

      Hi – I agree it can be tricky when your live in a more remote area, or one that does not have a very active literary community. Most states do have some sort of a writers’ association you can contact to see who might be in or near your local area. Here’s Florida’s:
      https://floridawriters.net/

      If you can’t find an in-person group, you may have to revert to online. Which may work well in that it could open the door to some great participants.



      • Laura Droege on December 12, 2017 at 3:18 pm

        Thanks, Sharon. I’m in Alabama, actually. Kathy’s in Florida. But I will try to find my state’s association. That’s a good suggestion. Thanks.



  6. Anna on December 11, 2017 at 6:43 pm

    I’ve belonged to two groups for many years; they are quite different from each other, but both are beneficial. In one group we have all been published, but the critiquing tends to be somewhat bland, although we have all benefited from the relentless cheerleading and prodding. In the other group, only a couple of us have been published, but the critiquing can be quite penetrating and useful. Now I have gotten myself mixed up with a third group, whose pub track records I don’t know much about, and although the verdict is still out, the members are congenial and being with them is very stimulating (I’ve already had an acceptance from prompts given in an early meeting). Different environments, different responses, all beneficial.



  7. Sharon Bially on December 12, 2017 at 11:44 am

    Thanks for the feedback, all! Happy writing :-)



  8. Addys Mayers on December 13, 2017 at 11:45 am

    Well, I must say that Commitment is the main point and should be the foundation of the group that wants to achieve its goals (everyone’s – in a perfect world and conjunction of circumstances).
    As a former English teacher, of course I can liken your main points to my classes. Teamwork, most likely, is a wise choice.
    Thanks for sharing your thoughts in this article, truly inspiring!