Ready, Aim…Bull’s-Eye! Targeting in Audience Development

By Sharon Bially  |  July 29, 2010  | 

PhotobucketPlease welcome Sharon Bially to Writer Unboxed. Sharon was one of our FINALISTS during our search for an unpublished contributor for the blog, which means you’ll see here her a few times annually from now on. After she announced her love of dark chocolate on her application (which earned her bonus points with us), she wrote:

I became serious about writing fiction in 1997, when I left a career in international economics to draft an early first novel. I’ve since completed a chapter book series for children and my latest novel, Veronica’s Nap…I write women’s fiction, and my stories portray a strong link between identity, autonomy and creativity.

Sharon has recently established a website to support her story, Veronica’s Nap, which she plans to self-publish through through iUniverse. Check out Sharon’s site HERE.

But Sharon has more than writing and self-publishing to tamp into here at WU. She’s also a publicist.

As a publicist, I’ve handled PR for many non-fiction books and have held dozens’ of authors’ hands through the publishing process, from manuscript-drafting and querying to agency and publisher relations, marketing and beyond. I have much to say about what I’ve witnessed as well as about book publicity and publishing industry trends.

We know you’ll enjoy her smart advice in her first post with us.

Ready, Aim…Bull’s-Eye!  Targeting in Audience Development

A few months ago, Jane blogged about audience development.  Her message: Writers must cultivate and grow their audiences every day of their lives.

As a publicist, I couldn’t agree more.

But I’d add that first, writers must ask: WHO is MY book’s audience?  In PR lingo, this is called the “target.”  Without it, audience-building has little chance of equating to readership.  But to hit it, you have to define it.

Businesses spend significant chunks of their budgets defining targets by analyzing who will buy what products.  Only after this groundwork has been laid does production begin.

Books are products, like it or not.  So the implication for writers is that the first step in audience development – targeting – should take place before drafting.  That it should be woven into our stories’ conception.

Now – before you boo me off the screen.  For the moment, I’m wearing my publicist’s hat.  I’ll slap my writer’s hat on shortly.   But when authors approach me as a publicist for advice about when to begin marketing plans, I invariably answer: “Before you start writing.”

Think about it.  Each of the dozens of genres and sub-genres in the fiction universe has its own following.  Say you write historical romance.  You know before putting a single word on the page that your target audience is historical romance fans. And you know precisely which hashtags to follow on Twitter, which blogs to comment on and which communities to join.  Bull’s-eye.

For “general” or “literary” fiction, the target is harder to define.  If you’re writing about twins separated at birth, you can aim for groups of twins or adoption forums.  Beyond that, your best bet is to reach out to the public at large.  From a targeting perspective, this is tantamount to shooting an arrow into thin air.   It’s why so many agents “develop” story ideas with their clients and why “general fiction” is so hard to sell.

With my writer’s hat on, I cringe when I hear this.  Shouldn’t we draw from our passions and write from the heart?  I plead.  Isn’t that what literature – what art – is all about?

In some rare instances, it is.  Booker Prize winner Arundhati Roy has infamously said:  “I don’t believe anyone should write unless they have a book to write!”  And celebs or others with pre-existing audiences enjoy more leeway.  Yet for most of us, writing for the fiction market means striking a balance between passion and PR.

How can we accomplish this without compromising our integrity or our craft?  There’s no easy answer. But I can offer these guidelines:

First, mine your experience and imagination for the ideas that inspire you most.

Next, drill into idea No. 1 and ask:

  • WHO, specifically, do its conflicts and characters appeal to?
  • WHY?
  • WHERE can I find them?

If you can’t answer ALL of these questions, put the idea aside and start again.  Or tweak it until you can.

Finally, beware of two common misconceptions:

One: that family, friends and other writers lie within your target.

Few generous souls necessarily choose books by authors they know.  While I was writing my first novel, my own mother told me: “That doesn’t sound like something I’d read!”

Two: that because an agent or editor is interested in your story, it has a target audience.

Agents’ and editors’ choices are shaped by established, not future, trends.  Many of these have already peaked or become saturated.  Which helps explain why so many good books don’t sell.

This brings us back to writing from the heart.  Luckily – and wondrously – some stories do draw an audience for no clear reason, having an impact and setting new trends.  And even meticulous audience development is no guarantee.  So a big part of our job as writers, I believe, is to aim for our target while remaining faithful to our imaginations: where progress begins.

How do you balance readership imperatives with inspiration?  Do they go hand in hand, or does one come first?  Have you thought about who the stories you write will appeal to, and why?

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  2. Kristan on July 29, 2010 at 8:40 am

    Hehe, I love that you can switch hats to look at this issue from both sides. Because I totally see both points.

    For me, I often think that pre-planning is a great way to begin a new project. Outline as much as you can, take notes on characters, figure out your audience, think BIG about what this book could be and how much people will love it.

    Then put all that aside and just write the dang thing. Don’t THINK; just WRITE. Don’t worry; just WRITE. Don’t be strategic; just WRITE.

    And when you finish your first draft, then you go back and take out all the pre-planning notes and ideas, and you sit them next to your draft, and you figure out how to make the two work together.

    (Note: That’s what my IDEAL process is. I never said I actually made it work, lol.)



  3. Nichole on July 29, 2010 at 11:48 am

    Thanks for your thoughts, Sharon. How useful for Writer Unboxed to have a rapport with a book publicist!



  4. Donna Cummings on July 29, 2010 at 2:10 pm

    This is an interesting post. I’m intrigued by the question of WHO specifically the conflicts and characters of my story would appeal to — I hadn’t thought of marketing in that sense. It’s given me a lot to ponder now!



  5. Erika Robuck on July 29, 2010 at 2:44 pm

    In a recent #litchat on Twitter we danced around this subject. The artistic side of many writers rebels against the notion of writing for an audience, but in order to get published the reader has to come into the equation at some point. To loosely paraphrase Steven King from ON WRITING, “The first draft is for the writer, all other drafts are for the reader.”

    Of course, writing vampire fiction to chase a trend when you’re into 17th century French literature is not healthy, but balancing your vision with the needs of the reader in your own genre, is.

    If writing is a shared experience between writer and reader–a relationship–both parties must be taken into account. That’s not a compromise of oneself, but rather, a compromise between two parties, which is healthy.

    Thanks for this great, thought-provoking post!



  6. Jessie Mac on July 29, 2010 at 5:50 pm

    I second what Nichole said that it’s good to have a publicist’s point of view who is also an author.

    Having started in March this year, I’m still finding my online ‘feet’.

    I’m still working on my 2 novels, working on one while the other marinates. I write adult fiction, SF/F and crime thrillers. So my present blog is focused on things I feel passionate about or I’m learning about eg writing, marketing, blogging, films and books.

    And when my books come out, I may have a more focused blog for each of the genres or just separate my blog into sections. I’m not sure yet. But it’s something I know I need to think about.

    Thanks for the post, Sharon.



  7. Tracy Hahn-Burkett on July 29, 2010 at 7:22 pm

    I’ll echo Nichole and Jessie: the perspective of a writer/publicist is definitely a valuable one.

    I’m one of those writers who is much more inclined to focus on the story I want to tell than what story I think will do well in the marketplace. But this business–and I know it’s a business– contains lots of realities, and Sharon, you’re right: we ignore questions of readers and markets at our peril.

    I think authors have to find the right balance: too little thought given to the reader can result in a story with a meager–or nonexistent–audience, but too much weight in that direction can lead to a work produced without passion. And if the author doesn’t care when she writes it, why should anyone at all care when he reads it?



  8. Sharon Bially on July 30, 2010 at 1:40 pm

    Thanks, all, for the insightful comments!



  9. Jan O'Hara on August 3, 2010 at 2:08 pm

    Coming late to this as I was at Nationals. I’ll own my ambivalence about the role of marketing in setting a story’s direction. I’ve seen too many people, some who are damn fine writers at that, become discouraged and stiffled by business demands. On the other hand, publishing is a business.

    When all is said and done, I think it comes down to this: if torn between two stories, why not pick the one which has a better chance of commercial success? And if the passion can be retained even as the story is made “bigger”, awesome!