Comic: Critique Workshop

By Debbie Ohi  |  May 15, 2010  | 

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11 Comments

  1. Angela Dahle on May 15, 2010 at 10:23 am

    Hilarious! I’ve been working on just this for a PB. Shortening everything. Oh the work to be done. Neverland is swamped with fun!

    wwww.-a-pen-in-neverland.blogspot.com



  2. Irene on May 15, 2010 at 12:25 pm

    Oh this is lovely!!! Thanks!!!

    It drives me absolutely mad, this “the editor will fix it, anyway” attitude! :-)))
    .-= Irene´s last blog ..V-Day in Russia! =-.



  3. Kristan on May 15, 2010 at 1:38 pm

    Lol! It’s one thing to accept feedback. It’s another thing to expect feedback to fix your story. :P
    .-= Kristan´s last blog ..2 is better than 1, but what about 3? =-.



  4. Donna Cummings on May 15, 2010 at 3:41 pm

    I love the spiderweb. LOL That was a LONG story!
    .-= Donna Cummings´s last blog ..Ode to a Bookmark =-.



  5. Jonah Gibson on May 15, 2010 at 9:47 pm

    Assuming the guy with just his feet showing has a pistol in his hand and a hole in his temple. If not the guy with the pistol to his head is missing.
    .-= Jonah Gibson´s last blog ..Technology We Can Live With =-.



  6. Indigo on May 15, 2010 at 10:57 pm

    I’m long winded myself. I’m trying not to let that show up in my writing. (Hugs)Indigo
    .-= Indigo´s last blog ..Jeepers Creepers =-.



  7. Kathleen Bolton on May 16, 2010 at 2:49 pm

    BWAH! I think I’ve been in a few of these critique groups myself!



  8. Laura Rachel Fox on May 16, 2010 at 11:39 pm

    THANK YOU!!! Maybe some of these long-winded hacks will get the picture. Love it.



  9. Lou Belcher on May 17, 2010 at 8:33 am

    Oh….. fantastic. Thanks for this. (Notice I’m only writing a few words. I so want to be in the succinct category):0)
    .-= Lou Belcher´s last blog ..How self-publishing can help build your business. =-.



  10. Therese Walsh on May 17, 2010 at 8:41 am

    Love this. The drool — :-D



  11. Debbie Ohi on May 25, 2010 at 10:45 am

    Thanks, all. Glad you liked my cartoon. :-)
    .-= Debbie Ohi´s last blog ..Weekly wdcount check-in: 250, 500, 1000 wds/day =-.