Verb Stew

By Therese Walsh  |  May 27, 2008  | 

PhotobucketNatalie Goldberg wrote some empowering creativity books for writers, including Writing Down the Bones: Freeing the Writer Within. I experimented with one of her verb exercises this morning. Want to play? This, from page 87:

Verbs are very important. They are the action and energy of a sentence. Be aware of how you use them. Try this exercise. Fold a sheet of paper in half the long way. On the left side of the page list ten nouns. Any ten.

At this point, Natalie lists ten nouns. I’ll list mine here instead. Feel free to list yours in comments, if you’d like to play along.

moon
keys
fate
linen
blood
trunk
lightning
shard
rabbit
Rome

Now turn the paper over to the right column. Think of an occupation; for example, a carpenter, doctor, flight attendant. List fifteen verbs on the right half of the page that go with that position.

Natalie listed an occupation (cook), but I’ll use something different here.

auto mechanic:

wash
paint
sand
peel
secure
cut
soak
mix
file
drain
flush
calibrate
disassemble
polish
replace

Back to Natalie’s instructions.

Open the page. You have nouns listed in a row down the left side and verbs listed on the right. Try joining the nouns with the verbs to see what new combinations you can get, and then finish the sentences, casting the verbs in the past tense if you need to.

Lightning peeled the artifice from her expression.
Blood washed away the basin’s white.
The moon disassembled our rational arguments; we slept.

Hmm. How’d you do? Feel free to post your stew or play in mine.

Write on, all!

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4 Comments

  1. Richard Mabry on May 27, 2008 at 9:38 am

    I’ve got to try this! Sounds like a great way to get the creative juices flowing. Thanks for sharing.



  2. Miranda on May 27, 2008 at 11:26 am

    This was a blast!

    Nouns first:
    Hibiscus
    keyboard
    body
    song
    tape
    painting
    vine
    cord
    tongue
    brooch

    verbs for an artist:
    cut
    sand
    paint
    mix
    create
    dream
    destroy
    hone
    tighten
    brood
    ponder
    dance
    slash
    sketch
    coat

    Sentences:
    Her sharp tongue destroyed his arguement.
    His song slashed through the solitude.
    The vine tightened across her throat, her words immediately silenced.



  3. Therese Walsh on May 27, 2008 at 3:14 pm

    Let us know how it goes, Richard.

    Nice going, Miranda. :-)



  4. Rubesy on May 27, 2008 at 4:25 pm

    The phone tested my patience.
    Edamame paired nicely with a large sake to fill me up before the bento even arrived.
    My overnight flight solved the problem of having nowhere to stay.

    The others were really reaching. Nice exercise, though. Thanks!